Sunday, October 13, 2013

A Short Story part 2

(I still have no idea on how to get "Unstuck" so I thought I may as well just put it up)

As soon as Jenny walked out of the class room her friends Penny and Jasmine walked over to her. “Hey Jenny!” they both called to her. “Hello you two” Jenny replied smiling. After they got their lunches from their backpacks they walked over to an unoccupied table. “So…” began Penny “What were you writing about Jasmine?” Jasmine grinned “A Princess who became a frog when she kissed another frog!” Jenny and Penny exchanged a look. “Uh… Jasmine… That’s already taken… You know, Disney’s version of “Princess and the frog”?” Jenny asked, Jasmine’s grin grew even wider “But here is the catch… They remain frogs for the rest of their froggy lives!” Jasmine then did her “Famous Evil Laugh.” Jenny raised an eyebrow at Jasmine and resumed eating her own lunch.

They finished their lunch and decided to play outside for a little, Penny picked up a long, brown and blue skipping rope “Hey do you want to skip?” she asked Jenny and Jasmine. “Sure” Jenny replied and Jasmine nodded, they walked over to a pole and tied one end of the skipping rope to it while Jenny help the other end further away. Penny and Jasmine lined up next to the rope and waited for Jenny to swing it around.
“Ready?” Jenny asked and the girls nodded, “Ready.” Replied Jasmine and Jenny began chanting:

Teddy Bear, Teddy Bear, turn around,        

Teddy Bear, Teddy Bear, touch the ground

Teddy Bear, Teddy Bear, show your shoe

Teddy Bear, Teddy Bear, that will do!

Teddy Bear, Teddy Bear, go upstairs-

Teddy Bear, Teddy Bear, say your prayers-

Teddy Bear, Teddy Bear, turn out the lights-

Teddy Bear, Teddy Bear, say good-night!”
Suddenly the School bell rang and it was time finish their stories. Jenny panicked slightly, she should have been thinking about what to write for a story during lunch break! She sat down at her desk next to Jasmine and picked up a pencil. She glanced around the room briefly and then began to think. Ok, ok a short story… Jenny sat there thinking away 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Le Stuck Here~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Only ten minutes left and Jenny still had no idea what to write about. Mrs Giovanni had told them not to think about what they would write but to start writing straight away… Well… It wasn’t working. Thanks for the tip, Mrs G but it does not work for me at all.
  Jenny stared at the clock for a minute more and then down to her blank paper. Well this sucks… she thought to herself. Suddenly she had a marvellous idea. Grinning from ear to ear she began writing….
A young girl named Lauren looked up from her school work
“A short story? How on this earth can someone write a short story?” after many minutes of hard core thinking, Lauren had a wonderful idea….

In a school room far, far away on another planet, there lived a girl who had to write a short story for a school project….

Jenny’s story went on like that for two pages

The End…
(Not really this just a draft.... I may add other stuff later)

1 comment:

  1. You don't have to put anything in the Le Stuck Here place the story works with nothing there. If you wanted to put something there I would suggest describing the noises of other peoples pens, feet, sighs, fingers tapping, the birds out the window. The things jenny can see in the room, like how someone always pokes their tong out when writing or how the girl in front of her had a big freckle on her neck or bouncy hair. Stuff like that.... And of course Yay you finally posted part two!

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